Toby is on Eli Stone. But this isn’t about that. I love Richard Schiff (and I spotted him way in the background of the episode way before he was introduced), and everytime I think of him, I think about his wonderful hat speech on The West Wing. Seriously, I just love that moment. And actually, this is about that particular episode, if I recall correctly. Years after the fact, this needs to be said.
The writers of The West Wing needed to rethink the order of Zoey’s kidnapping.
Ok, so here’s how it went: On the second to last episode of the season (sorry, I don’t remember which season), Zoey is kidnapped. That same episode, President Bartlet is told and drops his wine glass (amazing moment the way it was directed). The next episode, President Bartlet steps aside as president, and John Goodman steps in.
BAM. Season finale.
Season premiere, we continue the story. A mere four episodes in, we find Zoey. Was it four? Maybe it was even three. Either way, relatively quickly!
Ok, so here’s a solution to extend the drama.
A typical season is 22 episodes, right? Ok, well, cut this season where the wine glass falls. You don’t see a reaction. All you see is shock. All you’re left with ALL SUMMER LONG is shock. You’re blinded. You have no idea what’s going to happen. John Goodman? Who cares–at least right now. All it is, is about Zoey.
But that leaves you with 21 episodes, right? Ok, well then, add one of the famous “fluff” episodes in that season. Humor, general day-to-day information. Something we’ll enjoy. It will make the severity of that final episode even more daunting.
THEN for the season premiere, advertise the CRAP out of the fact that the president is STEPPING ASIDE. Is that REALLY his reaction? Could he REALLY be doing that?
Yes.
And THEN, you’re adding one more episode to the drama of the new season. Suddenly we’re at five episodes before finding Zoey without adding another episode. We’re using the same episodes, just making a two-parter season premiere. I really think it would grab. And people wouldn’t say, “That was quick,” at the end.
That would have made it AMAZING.
I’m just saying…
It amazes me that these few years later, with a retired series, I still think about this.